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Need some favors

First Version

Guys I need your help. Currently I'm working for a template design ,DAZE°. I know it looks simple and plain . I feel like it lack of something.
Any suggestion and good Critique are most welcomed.

Second version

Thanks everyone especially for those who leaved your comment and feedback here. I really appreciate that, well I've made some minor changes on the arrangement , colors placement and top header. This is not the final version yet & I'm still looking for more comments and critiques. I hope this version might look better than the previous one. What do you think? *click for larger preview

second version


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11 comments:

blank172 said...

Wow cool for kreativethemes? :-)

hafizmustakim said...

keep in touch macam kene letak kat atas ads atau bawah ads je. takde la nampak sangat suruh orang keep in touch dulu baru bace blog. ape yang ak rase la buat setakat ni

hafizmustakim said...

oh ngan categories ngan latest blog post kasi swap tempat. mungkin ak punye preference la kot

melonlover said...

cool..keep it up u..

mein melon said...

maybe you can add these:
* popular post
* see all photos

or maybe you can change the arrangement a lil bit:
* put the contact buttons sbelah search or at d very bottom
* since it's a photoblog, mybe u can mke the picture yg atas skali tu bigger with lesser words

or maybe you don ave to change anything at all coz ur design's alrdy so neat! :)

bali hambali said...

leh letak random photos ke
lg bes

Melongray said...

# blank172: Kreativethemes? hmmm ntah la hahaha.
# hafizmustakim: noted, thanks bebeh , ygbt!
#melonlover: trimas!
# mein melon: actually i try to make this layout looks simple and minimalist as it can be. Yups i've enlarged abit the top pictures & thanks for your comments, much appreciated!!
#bali hambali: yg top picture tu bole jadikan random photo gak!

danaini said...

i love the twitter punya update thingy tu.
perfect except i x suka zigzag lines. maybe org lain suka kot. just my POV. :)

Anonymous said...

the new one's nicer. but post bg looks a bit dully gray.

izuddin.helmi said...

Navi - Grey color agak tak sesuai. Use brighter so people can easily red it.

Main photo - Make the photo wider, throw away the about since you have 2 intro there =)

Layout positioning - Not balanced, use 960.gs template =)

Header of elements (Categories) - Maybe you can make it looks more different from the text

Ads spot - try to use common ads template

twitter, flickr etc - look a bit cartonish compared to your matured look design

Blog part - that looks cool but need refurbish it a bit

Just my personal thoughts =P

Btw, you've improved a lot! But still need to develop your taste =)

abdus said...

clean!!

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